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Rainbows End trip Recount

On the 20th of november the year sevens of Pt England school went to rainbows end for the year seven trip. We went to rainbows end in the morning around ten o’clock and we came at two o’clock. Before we went we were put into groups of six or seven, I was in a group of six. The people that were in my group were Sione,Aj M, Nevah, Zamara and Madison.






When we got there, me and my group went to the roller coaster first. The reason why we wanted to go to the roller coaster was because we wanted to start from the back make our way to the front. Our second ride was the power usage out of all the rides the power usage was the scariest, when I was on the power usage I fainted while the ride was still going that's why that was my scariest ride from Rainbows End. Then we went on a lot more then we got to my favorite one the stratosphere we did with five of my members after that we had to go back to school and go home.

Narrative

Once upon a time there were three little boys who loved going on trips. Their names were Sione, Leiite and Jaocb, they left Tonga to go on their trip to Auckland, New Zealand where they met the strongest the best looking guy on earth his name was Paschal he was the son of King doohole and Queen charming. He like Superman but better looking and stronger, him and Superman were very close friends when they were in high school. But Superman used his power for bad things and Paschal the good looking guy always tried to stop him from doing that but he would never stop. After they both finished school, Superman did a lot of bad things but Paschal would always win. Every time Paschal beats Superman he would always say, “there is still time for you to be good”. But one time Superman came up with a super idea it was to kidnap the three boys from tonga, Sione, Leiite and Jacob. He took them to an old underwater basement it was a place that no-one could track because the place was so deep. It took them one hour just to get down there. One thing that Superman didn't know about is that Jacob is a very smart boy he could use anything around him to attack or defend himself. Jacob knew that Superman’s weakness was Kryptonite but there was none of it around. People were asking if Paschal could save them but he had no idea where they were like he had no idea that Superman had a weakness Paschal’s Idea was to try and track him down but their was a sign of him, Paschal was thinking superman might of went to another country. But they didn’t so Paschal the most good looking guy went on a boat to see if superman had a secret ship like he always does but today he didn’t. After two whole days of looking for them he saw a bubbles coming from under the water it was unusual because volcanoes haven’t erupted in years so Paschal decided to go scuba diving that’s where he found a big boat where all the bubbles were coming out of. Paschal was looking for some-where to get in he didn’t find any doors so he punched a hole in the boat and their he was with the three little boys. First he saved the three little boys, then he took Superman to a cave full of Kryptonite.





The END

Keyhole Narrative

Narrative Writing

Once upon a time there was a little boy called James Tan, this boy could do amazing things like fly all the way up to Tonga. On may the 1st 2015 James Tan went to New Zealand to find some friend because when he lived he had no friends. The next morning he flew past lots of houses. Then he stopped at a house and he looked through the window and saw 3 little kids laughing and having fun, James has always dreamed of  being apart of a family, a happy family. So one day he knocked on their family's door and asked if he could live with them, but they sadly said no and closed the door. Later that night James watched the kids sleep through their window, for some reason they always left their window open. Then James had an idea once they were fully asleep James picked up all three of them and flew straight out the window and he took them to his house. His house was the forest because where he lived there was hardly any houses or people. Then one night Luke Book heard about the missing kids, Luke Book and James Tan were best friends in high-school but now they are enemies because Luke Book is the hero of the city and James was the bad guy. So that night Luke tied James to a tree with a very strong rope, then he scooped up all three of the kids and took them to his boat called the lolly bogar. He woke them up and told them they were safe then he asked for their names to check if they were the right kids, there were 3 boys their names Frank, Sione and Jacob. The 3 little boys begged Luke to take them home so the next morning he took them to their house and lived happily ever  after.