This morning we went for a walk.we were walking on the grass which was wet and frosty. The Grass looked white and frozen.
Then we heard a tui singing a song on top of the tree it was a cool song. I felt happy because the tui is song that was a cool day. I really loved the tui.
Then room 14 walked back to our classroom that was the end.
I enjoyed reading your first and second paragraphs Paschal because the sentences had some detail. Could you write about more in the last paragraph?
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