Thank you for sharing this learning. I can tell from this task that you agree cockles should not be taken home, however, may I suggest you share a task description to help your blog readers understand what you are sharing. Keep up the good work.
Paschal, I agree with Miss TA! I would love for you to share a task description as we have discussed in class on every blog post to help your readers understand what it is you have been learning about and working on in class. Also, I would love to see you begin to develop your sentences with more detail and to proofread and edit before you post to your blog. Can you see some missing full stops in your sentences?
Hi Paschal
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing this learning. I can tell from this task that you agree cockles should not be taken home, however, may I suggest you share a task description to help your blog readers understand what you are sharing. Keep up the good work.
Miss T.A
Paschal, I agree with Miss TA! I would love for you to share a task description as we have discussed in class on every blog post to help your readers understand what it is you have been learning about and working on in class. Also, I would love to see you begin to develop your sentences with more detail and to proofread and edit before you post to your blog. Can you see some missing full stops in your sentences?
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