Narrative Writing

Once upon a time there was a little boy called James Tan, this boy could do amazing things like fly all the way up to Tonga. On may the 1st 2015 James Tan went to New Zealand to find some friend because when he lived he had no friends. The next morning he flew past lots of houses. Then he stopped at a house and he looked through the window and saw 3 little kids laughing and having fun, James has always dreamed of  being apart of a family, a happy family. So one day he knocked on their family's door and asked if he could live with them, but they sadly said no and closed the door. Later that night James watched the kids sleep through their window, for some reason they always left their window open. Then James had an idea once they were fully asleep James picked up all three of them and flew straight out the window and he took them to his house. His house was the forest because where he lived there was hardly any houses or people. Then one night Luke Book heard about the missing kids, Luke Book and James Tan were best friends in high-school but now they are enemies because Luke Book is the hero of the city and James was the bad guy. So that night Luke tied James to a tree with a very strong rope, then he scooped up all three of the kids and took them to his boat called the lolly bogar. He woke them up and told them they were safe then he asked for their names to check if they were the right kids, there were 3 boys their names Frank, Sione and Jacob. The 3 little boys begged Luke to take them home so the next morning he took them to their house and lived happily ever  after.